"Six Shades of Unsure"
Maybe it will jog an idea for you.
Or, you could just try saying this ten times fast. Impossible!
Pags on June 6 2007 edit · delete Well, I rather like the images and ideas it carries. So I will play with it on the bus tomorrow before I become known as rhyming comic poet with haiku tendencies
Leanne on June 7 2007 edit · delete Pags the rhyming comic
Was six shades of unsure
Should she turn to haiku
Or rhyme just like before?
Six shades of unsure
Beneath the leaf lies answers
So Pags lights it up
Pags on June 7 2007 edit · delete Oh. Did I say something amiss??
Leanne - I am honoured to be imortalised in doggeral. Thank you!
Leanne on June 8 2007 edit · delete Tis not doggerel. It's very deep and meaningful verse. Just vaguely tangerine.
EmilyRose on Feb. 29 2008 edit · delete
haaaa haaaaa haaaa, tangerine is used in my writing group to replace a more colorful word so as not to attend the book browsers at Borders. We use it in such sentences as "That tangererineing son of a ...." or "Tangerine that", etc.
Six shades of unsure
are all a mind can melt into
at the moment meander melancholy
amber
that's all I got..... and some rainbows spinning in my head, heading off to bed, red? velvet, shit, stop, stop, stop
scuse the language
